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From: te_amo
Subject: my shit teen angst song
Date: 2005-11-20 11:42:09

the fighting persists
i cant bear the thought of this
ill do whatever i can to assist
in making things right again

abruptly ended fone calls
leave me pacing thru the halls
my thoughts semm to echo for eternity
this is not the reality
that i had envisioned

im lying here 
my eyes in tears
as you are no longer
BY MY SIDE
thoughts of u
still linger and radiate
through my SOUL

for now things return
to the way they once were
but for how long
will i be left standing ALONE
thoughts of you from which i 
CANNOT ESCAPE

please comment on its shitness

kyo 

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From: DeadPunk
Subject: my shit teen angst song
Date: 2005-11-20 11:47:14

Hey at least you labeled the thread honestly..  

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From: mr_fear
Subject: Re: my shit teen angst song
Date: 2005-11-21 12:10:12

*lauughs*
hey, thats not that bad i've written lyrics for some of local bands in my town an trust
me when i say i've seen worse much,much worse

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From: glimmerrat
Subject: Re: my shit teen angst song
Date: 2005-11-21 18:28:47

It sounds like a generic metal song nowadays. 

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